24.1.12

Night sounds

Through open windows
night sounds darken the writers'
imaginations

or

Through open windows
night sounds infiltrate writers'
creative musings

Which do you like better?
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2 comments:

DT said...

The first, for me. Beautifully put together.

Thursday, 26 January 2012 at 23:19:00 GMT
Philip C James said...

Thanks, Derek. Always good to get feedback!

Friday, 27 January 2012 at 19:09:00 GMT

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